New Member Handout
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Re: New Member Handout
by ptwortman » August 22nd, 2009, 10:46 pm
still a few errors, but it's good enough for me
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Re: New Member Handout
by Tanner » August 22nd, 2009, 11:03 pm
ptwortman wrote:still a few errors, but it's good enough for me
What errors?
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Re: New Member Handout
by Sunny » August 22nd, 2009, 11:22 pm
He might have been referring to the website...
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Re: New Member Handout
by ptwortman » August 23rd, 2009, 2:20 pm
respect is still wrong for mentors, i thought "The Handout" was being changed, its still "interest in...", for the FAQs, the interested to join should be On our team, not In our team, under team basics, should be As an active, not As a active, and exceptions should be more like expectations, Valerie Strain, not Varlerie Strain
only bc i have nothing better to do at the moment.
only bc i have nothing better to do at the moment.
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Re: New Member Handout
by Tanner » August 23rd, 2009, 6:38 pm
V1.2
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Words of the Year: Tautology, Hysteresis, Buxom, Purvey
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
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Re: New Member Handout
by Logan » August 23rd, 2009, 7:07 pm
I like it.
It's very short and to the point. I did not see any errors when I read through the newest version. Thanks Tanner!
It's very short and to the point. I did not see any errors when I read through the newest version. Thanks Tanner!
ptwortman wrote:...you make a double graph comparing Logan's hair and frustration levels.
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Re: New Member Handout
by ptwortman » August 23rd, 2009, 7:49 pm
exceptions is still bugging my, but i can deal good jorb
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Re: New Member Handout
by Sunny » August 23rd, 2009, 8:22 pm
Just some smaller errors that I found.
- Our Mission: "Peachtree Ridge High School Robolions exists..." should be "exist".(Actually, should probably make it "The Peachtree Ridge...") Sounds better.
- Our Mission: "It allows students and mentors..." Pronoun issue, should be "they".
- Fast Facts: "Founded in 1989", FIRST was founded in 1992.
- FAQs: "I'm interested to join", I think it should be "I'm interested in joining..." Maybe Patrick can double check that.
- Team Basics: "...we have a few exceptions..." Should be expectations. ( I think this is what's bugging Patrick).
- Team Basics: "Reliable & actively contribute..." I believe it should be "Reliably & actively..."
Still looks good.
Also...anyone heard anything about the NC regional??? According to CD, the news was made official a little while ago. Anyone wanna go to a 3rd regional???
- Our Mission: "Peachtree Ridge High School Robolions exists..." should be "exist".(Actually, should probably make it "The Peachtree Ridge...") Sounds better.
- Our Mission: "It allows students and mentors..." Pronoun issue, should be "they".
- Fast Facts: "Founded in 1989", FIRST was founded in 1992.
- FAQs: "I'm interested to join", I think it should be "I'm interested in joining..." Maybe Patrick can double check that.
- Team Basics: "...we have a few exceptions..." Should be expectations. ( I think this is what's bugging Patrick).
- Team Basics: "Reliable & actively contribute..." I believe it should be "Reliably & actively..."
Still looks good.
Also...anyone heard anything about the NC regional??? According to CD, the news was made official a little while ago. Anyone wanna go to a 3rd regional???
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Re: New Member Handout
by Tanner » August 23rd, 2009, 9:18 pm
V1.3
I swear I read somewhere that FIRST was created in 1989.
Create a new thread for new discussions. No hijacking.
Edit:
I did read 1989! FIRST was founded in 1989.
http://usfirst.org/who/content.aspx?id=160
Though games didn't start until 1992? I don't know, I just work here....
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I swear I read somewhere that FIRST was created in 1989.
Create a new thread for new discussions. No hijacking.
Edit:
I did read 1989! FIRST was founded in 1989.
http://usfirst.org/who/content.aspx?id=160
Though games didn't start until 1992? I don't know, I just work here....
-Tanner
Words of the Year: Tautology, Hysteresis, Buxom, Purvey
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
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Re: New Member Handout
by Tanner » August 23rd, 2009, 9:23 pm
V1.4
1.4 = Founded in 1989
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1.4 = Founded in 1989
Wikipedia wrote:The inaugural FIRST Robotics Competition was held in 1992 in the Manchester Memorial High School gymnasium.
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- New Member Handout.pdf
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Words of the Year: Tautology, Hysteresis, Buxom, Purvey
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
"Crossing into established events is strictly forbidden. Except for cheap tricks." - Doctor Who
"Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense you're just not keeping up." - Doctor Who
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